How is the prologue to my story?

The first few sentences created some interesting imagery but the first line of dialogue came out weird. However later on in the story I started to like and learn about clive's personality and how sarcastic or evil he might become which is good because it makes me want to read on. I really do like it and I am interested on why someone like him would call the helpless girl a witch and it could become an interesting story. Also some parts of the story show good writing.