How's my novel?:):):):)?

In the beginning you're talking about how someone's following you and then you go into detail about fall. you should have put that in when you were talking about the harvesting. Also you should have said a little bit more about your background before you jumped in to the exciting part of the book. Make sure you use alternate words which means don't use the same words 2 sentences in a row unless it's a technique that you're trying. The plot sounds interesting though so I would read it. Don't put anymore of your writing online though because people could steal it. :D it's good